David, like the idea of the strapline - "Bockleton.. A Great Adventure" - nice, catchy and immediately puts the viewer in perspective re what experience they could have. I wonder if there still needs to be a subtitle in there somewhere still though that clarifies Bockleton's business/purpose absolutely? Consistent look and feel in terms of layout, nav and imagery - good. Unsure about the need for the gradation under the nav links though - think complicates legibility needlessly. Clear header, nav, content and footer areas though - keen to see this progress. Must work in Bham logo and the Bockleton leaf too somewhere though. Maybe Helen will consider you tweeking the Bockleton logo a little - just as a suggestion latterly?
Thanks for your comments Andy, the banner will definately be tweaked with the removal of the Harry Potter clouds, there will be a flash montage of pictures as the title header which will of course include the leaf logo. Cheers
I really like your strip of pictures at the top, as this gives the user an feel of the place straight away. I think your design looks very well laid out and everything is easy to find.
David, like the idea of the strapline - "Bockleton.. A Great Adventure" - nice, catchy and immediately puts the viewer in perspective re what experience they could have. I wonder if there still needs to be a subtitle in there somewhere still though that clarifies Bockleton's business/purpose absolutely? Consistent look and feel in terms of layout, nav and imagery - good. Unsure about the need for the gradation under the nav links though - think complicates legibility needlessly. Clear header, nav, content and footer areas though - keen to see this progress. Must work in Bham logo and the Bockleton leaf too somewhere though. Maybe Helen will consider you tweeking the Bockleton logo a little - just as a suggestion latterly?
ReplyDeleteWonder also if the top banner sky needs to seem a little summery too as opposed to the darker clouds there at the mo'?
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments Andy, the banner will definately be tweaked with the removal of the Harry Potter clouds, there will be a flash montage of pictures as the title header which will of course include the leaf logo.
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I really like your strip of pictures at the top, as this gives the user an feel of the place straight away. I think your design looks very well laid out and everything is easy to find.
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